Page 1 A man falls asleep when waiting for the red light in the street at night.
Page 2 The man is very careful with his car as he cleans a scratch on his car door. (USING DETAIL TO MAKE A STORY AND PERFORMANCE BELIEVABLE) He enters a factory and finds that his aide not only beats a man, but also wasn’t able to get the signature on the document. So he has to do the dirty work himself.
Page 5 On the way, the victim tries to escape during a chance he got when vomiting outside the car. The man feels his life ridiculous watching his men chasing the victim. (TITLE CARD: AN ELEGANT WORLD)
Page 6 The next morning, his wife wakes him up and forces him to go to the parents meeting with her. Their housing situation is not very ideal as they don’t have running water all the time.
Page 8 During the parents meeting, when being asked what he does, the man doesn’t know what to say. The teacher asks if there is anything wrong with her family as her grades are suffering.
Page 9 So the man has no choice but to invite the teacher for a smoke at the man’s room.The dad’s solution is to give the teacher money. (But later we know that he gave the teacher stripper coupons.) His relationship with his daughter gets so heated on the way home that he almost drives into a couple of pedestrians.
Page 12 In order to investigate who is behind the signature violence, an ugly man meets the dad to straight things out. When they mention an incident about their childhood crush on a girl, they got into a water fight which tells the audience that they have a long and naughty relationship. But in the end, the ugly man threatens the dad of his family. (PHYSICAL OPPORTUNITY: GOT A THREAT FROM HIS CHILDHOOD FRIEND BECAUSE OF HIS FORCING SIGNATURE PRACTICE)
Page 16 Older brother is not happy with young brother about his job performance although the young one tries to celebrate the older brother’s birthday.
Page 18 The dad goes to the real estate agency trying to find a big house. (EMOTIONAL OPPORTUNITY)
Page 20 On a funeral, the dad meets the younger brother, who is unhappy about not being able to receive the cut of a deal from the dad. But the older brother is very taken by the dad and the contrast is obvious and very irritating for the younger brother. (CHANGE OF PHYSICAL PLAN IN THE ORG)
Page 24 The daughter receives a package from the teacher to his dad, which is a book about how to be a dad. And they find out the fact that he gave the teacher stripper coupons. The family is very angry with him. (CHANGE OF EMOTIONAL PLAN WITH THE FAMILY)
Page 26 The dad goes to a construction side trying to solve a problem of delay. When the negotiation fails, the dad asks his brothers to come to fight. The fight becomes funny when a bulldozer enters the chaos. And it ends when the dad is beaten on the head and is sent to the hospital. His wife gives him an ultimatum but he claims that the family doesn’t have enough money for children’s education.
Page 33 The dad negotiates again with the construction with agreement. Then he goes to look at new houses again for his family. He pays for the deposit of the villa on the spot. He buys his daughter’s favorite food for her but she doesn’t want it. So he ends up alone at home with nothing else to do but to look around the house. Then he finds his daughter’s diary and finds that she is very ashamed of him and wants him die.
Page 38 When the daughter comes home, both of them are very disappointed at each other. The dad is so drunk that he wants his daughter is kill him. When the mother didn’t pick up the phone, the daughter has no choice but to call the police. So the dad is taken to the police station and they find him with multiple criminal record. An old policeman humiliates him in front of his daughter, who feels bad about everything. When finally back at home, the wife wants him out because she doesn’t want bad influence on their daughter anymore.
Page 45 The dad is barely escape an assassination attempt in a convenient store, which becomes a breaking news on TV. The wife and daughter is deeply concerned. The younger brother comes to see the dad coming out of the prison and tells him that he is no longer in charge of the construction project because of the incident. When he comes back home, of course the wife and daughter are already gone and the real estate agent calls him for the next payment and he promises to pay.
Page 55 The dad goes hunting with the older brother, but he doesn’t have solutions. Only to give him a deer to bury. When the dad finds out from his childhood friend that it was the younger brother who hires people to kill him, he goes to beat him up only to be stopped by the older brother. (POINT OF NO RETURN)
Page 60 When his childhood friend tries to convince the dad to betrayal his boss, the dad says no because it was his boss who gave him and his family the apartment to stay. (POINT OF NO RETURN) The next morning, when he wakes up alone and washes his face with soap, the water suddenly stopped.
Page 64 The dad goes to his in-laws’ place to talk to his wife, who tells him that he wants a divorce, which absolutely destroys him.
Page 69 The dad comes back and visits the younger brother at the hospital. The dad wants out and makes peace with him. But of course the younger brother still wants to kill him and during the chaos, the dad kidnaps the younger brother in his car. The dad calls his friend for ideas and they decide to blackmail the boss with his brother. (EVERYTHING IS LOST) When waiting for a red light, the younger brother tries to escape and he ends up in the trunk of the car.
Page 77 The dad changes his mind of blackmail and calls his boss for a private meeting. (EPIPHANY) But he is spot by the bad guys and a car chase scene ensues. During the chase, his car collides with a bus but he barely escapes. (PHYSICAL CLIMAX)
Page 82 Only then did he realize that the younger brother has already died in the truck. Then the boss comes and confrontation ensues. The dad has no choice but to kill the boss. (EMOTIONAL CLIMAX) At the hospital, the wife and daughter come to meet his childhood friend who waits at the emergency room.
Page 91 The wife comes to see him out of the hospital and into the prison. His friend and family hasn’t given up on him. But in order to raise money for his daughter’s education, he sold himself into his friend’s organization.
Page 96 The dad comes out of the prison and moves the family into a big new house. But his wife and daughter are all going to Canada.
Page 100 One year later, he goes to the doctor alone and he is very unhappy about the doctor’s attitude. He goes back to do what he does best: forcing signatures. As everybody is celebrating the success of the signature, he is sullen with beer alone and beats the guy who insists him singing.
Page 104 The dad receives a video recording of the family’s life in Canada. At first, he is very happy about what he is seeing but soon he starts to feel bad about himself and his instant noodle that he is eating. Eventually he breaks down crying and breaks his instant noodle bowl.
Page 107 In the end, he has to clean it up himself.
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